Monday, February 2, 2009

Completely Incomplete


Trying to write since many days but could not write a full meaningful thing. So few completely incomplete stuff...


नम है फिर आज मेरा मॅन
और आँखें साथी मॅन की
होठ मेरे कंपकँपाते
हाथ भी हैं थरथराते

बोलता कुछ और ही हूँ,
चाहता पर कुछ और.....

one more...

नींव मेरी मेरा मॅन,
पानी सा मेरा जीवन,
ढल जाउन किसी भी रंग मैं,
पर बहुँ बस तेरी ओर,

तुम हो जैसे एक सागर,
मैं अगर नदी बन जाउन,
मिलता हूँ पल पल मैं तुम मैं,
मॅन तुम्हारा पर बड़ा विशाल,

और कभी बारिश मैं बन के,
मुस्कुराहट ले आता हूँ,
रूप तुम भी हो बदलती,
मैं तो बस पानी समान,

one more

यह कौन मेरे शहर मैं नया आया है,
अपने रंग और अपनी हँसी साथ लाया है....

now the final incomplete one

Blind by choice
and
Deaf by noise
I am breathing pain
in my own my world...
Travelling back and forth
with empty heart
sitting helplessly sad
with my smoke filled self
I am watching you
going some place else.....

5 comments:

rashmi said...

Tumhari shayri ka Adhurapan hi to unki khasiyat hai.
Tum jo bhi likhte ho mujhe to bahut achha lagta hai phir chahe vo incomplete ho ya complete.

Waiting for the complete one!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gary said...

Trying to write since many days but could not write a full meaningful thing. So few completely incomplete stuff...


Blind by choice
and
Deaf by noise
I am breathing pain
in my own my world...
Travelling back and forth
with empty heart
sitting helplessly sad
with my smoke filled self
I am watching you
going some place else.....

trying to rhyme ????

Vikas Shrivastava said...

yup...actually tried a lot to rhyme...but getting the right words depends a lot on mood...so like this....

The Chef said...

yeh kaun mere shahar main naya aaya hai,
apne rang aur apni hansi saath laya hai....

kehne ko ajnabi hai
par zahan main ab usi ka saya hai

abhi dooriyan hain
par nazdikiyon ki mehek saath laya hai

ye kaun mere shahar main naya aaya hai ..

Vikas Shrivastava said...

bingo dude....nicely added ines.. thanks for all the effort...